Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Deleted Scene: Take 12 - In Another Castle (Part 9)


9 ~ Reminiscence

Lui found himself at the base of a tall tower. On the wall of the tower was a painting of the throne room he just left. Looking up, he could see a small window close to the very top. Cupping his hands around his mouth, Lui shouted, “HANNA! HANNA! LET DOWN YOUR HAIR! Or… you… YOU COULD FLY DOWN TOO! THAT WOULD BE GREAT! … HANNA?”

A dark head poked out of the window. “Lui? LUI! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!”
“RESCUING YOU, SILLY! NOW COME DOWN FROM THERE!”
“I CAN’T!”
“WHY NOT?”
“ONLY THOSE WITH A PURE HEART CAN BE LET OUT!”
Lui tilted his head in confusion. “BUT YOU DO HAVE A PURE HEART!”
“NO, I DON’T!
“Hmm… IS THERE A WAY WE CAN TALK WITHOUT SHOUTING? THIS IS KIND OF KILLING MY THROAT!”
“Oh, SORRY!” The head disappeared and Lui heard a short buzz sound. Looking around, he found an intercom in the side of the tower.

“How convenient!” Lui pressed the button. “Hanna?”
“Hi,” came a timid voice on the intercom.
“Hi! So what were you saying again?”
“The tower doesn’t let anyone out if they don’t have a pure heart.”
“Then why won’t it let you out?”
“… Weren’t you listening?”
“Of course I was. I just don’t see why it won’t let you out since all your evil is in the other dimension.”
“That’s a good point. I don’t know.”
“You’ve got a beautiful heart, Hanna. You’re always trying to help others, no matter what that evil side tries to do.”
“I don’t think so. The evil will always be part of me.”
“Maybe, but that’s not the Hanna I know,” Lui continued. “The one I know is brave and smart and will do anything to protect her friends.”
“…but I…”
“Remember that time you came to Iul’s castle to save me and DJ? You went through all those dangerous traps and risked letting your evil side out just to help us! You’ve got to stop letting Shard tell you you’re no good. It’s not true.”

The other side of the intercom was silent for a few minutes. “…not true. Not true! THAT’S IT! Lui, you’re a genius! Thank you!”
“…Does this mean you’ll go out with me?” Lui squeezed his eyes shut and waited for a response. Static and awkward silence filled the air for several long minutes.
Gulping, Lui tried the intercom again. “…Hanna?”
After a pause, she replied in a slightly higher pitch than normal, “Hold, please.”

Hearing a flutter from above, Lui looked up to see Hanna gliding down from the window. She gracefully landed beside him, face bright red. Awkwardly staring at the ground, Hanna stood nervously quiet. She suddenly reached over and held his hand, face turning a deeper shade of red.
“…Does that mean yes?”
Hanna nodded with a smile.
“YAY!” Momentarily forgetting she was holding his hand, Lui jumped into the air and hugged Hanna.
After a minute or two, Hanna coughed in embarrassment and said, “W-We should probably go help the rest of our friends now…”
“Oh right.” Lui broke the hug, grabbed Hanna’s hand, and jumped through the portal.

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